Time line
  • Jim send it to Jimmie by 3 Nov
  • Jimmie send it to Nigel by 10 Nov
  • Nigel send it to Brian by 15 Nov
  • Brian send it to Amgad by 22 Nov
  • Amgad send it to general by 25 Nov
  • Amgad to receive comments from general by 2 Dec
  • Mark and Amgad considered all comments and make paper ready for final submission by 16 Dec.

Does this sequence and timeline sound reasonable?